Bo’s BGSU Blog

For essay one the critique I have some revisions that I need to make. In this essay I need to revise some of my sentence structure and word use to make the reader have a more clear and better understanding as to what it is I’m writing about. I also want to add some more to my conclusion as well as make by CA and R more effective.  I really like the process of peer review. Not only does it help me by seeing the comments my classmates make but i also learn alot from reviewing other essays. In my peer review I realized that my sentence structure may be unclear sometimes and I can be a bit repetitive at times. I plan to take the material i learn from peer review and be able to transfer that into the “real world” when I’m older. i beleive that communicating and being able to write effectively is essential to being succesful in the “real world”. And what I’m learning now through the writing process and peer review I will carry one with me not only in future classes but in my professional life as well.